Day 5 Let us know…

Gibraltar at Sunrise
by b

Did he realize
That he
Should
Let us know…?

He was going away
Without so much as a word.
No more
Restless wandering from
Room to room.
No
Thought of those others,
The ones that watched.
No sign.
When he slipped away to Bangkok
Or Gibraltar
Or fled to Cheyenne
To see a rodeo
With
Joy as his companion,
Did he realize that we needed to know.
We need more
Than blank pages.

b

I loved this comment posted by Paisley…just because the page is blank does not mean that we are gone it just means, well, we didn’t feel like writing today. She said:

the longer i live,, the more convinces i become,, that everyones reality is not the same… some times when you ask someone what they are thinking about,, and they say nothing.. they mean it……


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5 thoughts on “Day 5 Let us know…

  1. the longer i live,, the more convinces i become,, that everyones reality is not the same… some times when you ask someone what they are thinking about,, and they say nothing.. they mean it……

  2. Barbara, this is a great poem. I see more in it than some might as well. The comments by Paisley and Gautami, yes…I turn inward at times and though I may still read and have thoughts to share, I feel the need to close myself off from others and just be.I am bookmarking this poem, the last sentence is the other side of that.

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